That Bible story about the dismembered corpse

by Drake McDonald
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I want to tell you a story about a failing marriage, a family betrayal, a brutal gang rape, and a dismembered corpse.

Did I mention itโ€™s a Bible story?

The Book of Judges has always had a special place in my heart ever since I first read it as a kid. Heroes like Samson, Gideon, and Ehud were among my favorites. (Ehud especially, since Iโ€™m a southpaw, too, and representation matters!)

I can also remember the first time I read Judges 19 and how it made my stomach turn. Itโ€™s one of those stories that just kind of makes you scratch your head and go, โ€œHuhโ€ฆ Iโ€™m not sure what to do with that.โ€ Itโ€™s a story about senseless sexual violence, and unlike most of the other stories in Judges, God doesnโ€™t really figure into it. Heโ€™s not invoked in the text; thereโ€™s not really a moral to the story; there are no angels or prophets or voices calling in the night.

When I got this story as my assignment, my first reaction was to laugh really hard, but my second reaction was to say, โ€œChallenge accepted.โ€

I realized early on that the only way I could make such a brutal, difficult story approachable was through focusing on the characters. Instead of a story about marriage, betrayal, rape, and dismemberment, I told the story of a concerned father, a reformed gang member, a violent addict, a grieving husband, and the woman who connects them all.

As a writer, I like to explore extreme contrasts, which is why I decided to employ a moving point of view. By changing the point of view throughout the story, I could contrast characters like Zeru (the father), Hutsa (the husband), Criat (the reformed Desperado), and Berekoi (the wayward Journeymen addict). I had never written a moving POV before, so writing this story really stretched my skills at crafting voices. (After all, itโ€™s hard to believe youโ€™re jumping from one character to another if they all sound the same!)

I was originally attracted to the Lawless project because it sought to reimagine old stories in a new setting; and the majority of my fiction up to this point has explored this arenaโ€” though never within a biblical context. After joining with the other authors in the collection to bring these stories to life for a new audience of science-fiction fans, I can truthfully say that I have been challenged and subsequently grown as a writer, a reader, and a follower of Jesus.


Drake McDonald

Drake McDonald is a storyteller. He makes videos, designs art installations, and sometimes he even writes short fiction and poetry. He is interested in the stories that connect us all.

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Drake McDonald

Drake McDonald is a storyteller. He makes videos, designs art installations, and sometimes he even writes short fiction and poetry. He is interested in the stories that connect us all.

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